Story Competition!

Hullo! As you may know, there is a competition to see who can make the best Halloween story at Stardoll's Most Wanted. You have to use at least one of the blog writers' names and it should be a couple of paragraphs, as it is a short story! The biggest rule is to MAKE IT YOURSELF!!! The prizes are great, and the fun is there, so I highly recommend you at least try to make a story. I love writing and I decided to enter. So here is my entry:

Emorox4eva was shuffling silently along a long, cobblestoned-paved road, rushing to get home before dawn set across the still yet ominous town.

Her distant dark-brown eyes scanned the dim-lit street for the quickest way to get back to her apartment. Then, suddenly, a lone dog howl made her quicken her pace to a jog, disquieting her.

She heard him before he was upon her. A rustle of branches, deep signs accompanying awkward pauses. The dark shadow leapt from the foliage, arms outstretched, yearning to catch her. Emorox4eva tried to depart, sprinting for a clearing, her heart racing and a scream held in her throat. But there he was, already in front of her, chuckling to himself.

THE END
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I have an add-on, but I just submitted the first part because it was a cliffhanger. :]
Here was the part I was thinking about adding on:


November 1, 2009

THE STARDOLL HERALD

Teen by the name of Emorox4eva found lifeless, blood drained from her body, one mile from her apartment. The police have not uncovered any leads, but a neighbor-hood woman, dubbed as Findurlove, is convinced the homicide victim was killed by a local young man called John_2_el_mejor.

THE END OF THE ADD ON!

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So what did you think? Did you like it/hate it? Reply in comments :]


-Adjaja/Anna